Holy-, wait let me start again: HOLY SHIT! This is awesome!
"Henry tried to teach him how to throw his voice once. Long fingers in his mouth showing him where to place his tongue. They had become sidetracked rather quickly." I loved this part, especially after the excellent first paragraphs <3
I'm afraid my comment will never be constructive or helpful for future writing, I'm always too amazed by other peoples' ability to write ^__^;
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"Henry tried to teach him how to throw his voice once. Long fingers in his mouth showing him where to place his tongue. They had become sidetracked rather quickly." I loved this part, especially after the excellent first paragraphs <3
I'm afraid my comment will never be constructive or helpful for future writing, I'm always too amazed by other peoples' ability to write ^__^;