Okay, I'm back to leave you the longest comment ever!
First off, title! GUH, not only does it just sound lovely and sensual, but it does what every title should it adds to the story. For the people who know/look up what it means, it just adds another layer of delicious, and that's why your titles are always so lovely and amazing.
Henry's tenderness is like the deceptive yielding of quicksand or tar. His love is as all consuming and so rarely without cruelty.
GAH, I think I quoted that the first time, because it's such lovely description and characterization and just mmmmmm.
And I'm trying to pull out more things to quote but it's all just SO FUCKING MIND MELTING! GAH! HOW DO YOU DO IT, YOU MAKE IT ELEGANT AND BEAUTIFUL AND SO FUCKING HOT!
He'd never been so wet without bleeding before. Never felt such a mortifying slickness trickling down his thighs.
THAT. Dear lord, I just marvel at you. MARVEL. WHY YES, YES WE ARE KINK SOUL MATES. And the line before this, guh. I adore how, throughout the whole thing, the lust and the pleasure are always compared to something ghastly and gory and painful, such as the wire trap in his gut. It's such visceral imagery that has me flinching (I'm not big on gore) but it's all just a comparison for the lust and gah! YOU! I MARVEL!
Mmmmm and his groaning and moaning and wailing, and dear lord I have such a noisy!sex kink and you are just smashing it with Thor's hammer, GAH!
Empty, empty, his body screamed antonyms at him, oh yes, you're so empty. And wouldn't it be nice to be full...
That entire paragraph = Holy. Fuck.
Desperate Coward is the best kind of Coward, desperate for sex Coward is... THERE ARE NO WORDS FOR MY LOVE OF THIS PARAGRAPH IN DESCRIBING COWARD'S NEED FOR COCK!
And sweet jesus, having to pay the cab driver all... unnnnf, this comment is apparently going to be me making incoherent noises and flailing. A. Lot.
The carrot. I have completely lost my train of thought rereading that. Like, I know intellectually that it's funny, that I should be laughing, but my porn brain is like HOLY FUCK SO HOT. WHY IS THAT SO HOT, VICE? I DON'T UNDERSTAND. I blame your description of his tightness. *shivers*
OH! I WAS GOING TO QUOTE AT YOU, BUT GOT DISTRACTED!
To be fucked, to be taken, to have yourself stuffed full of cock – that's all that matters.
Yes Coward, that is what it's like to be an animal. And it is hot. Guh, just, guh, that bolded phrase especially. *keels over*
Henry teases him sometimes (teases while he's teasing) fingering him slowly, says that he's made to be fucked, that he's almost like a woman between his legs.
KINK BUDDIES! COWARD LIKE A WOMAN, GAAAAHH, COWARD MADE TO BE FUCKED, GAAAAAAAHHHHHH, YES YES YES YES YES! THAT. ALL OF THAT!
Then I'm just entirely incoherent for Coward, desperate and twitching on the floor in suspended orgasm... I can't even, like, just, dayum.
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Date: 2011-02-03 05:51 am (UTC)First off, title! GUH, not only does it just sound lovely and sensual, but it does what every title should it adds to the story. For the people who know/look up what it means, it just adds another layer of delicious, and that's why your titles are always so lovely and amazing.
Henry's tenderness is like the deceptive yielding of quicksand or tar. His love is as all consuming and so rarely without cruelty.
GAH, I think I quoted that the first time, because it's such lovely description and characterization and just mmmmmm.
And I'm trying to pull out more things to quote but it's all just SO FUCKING MIND MELTING! GAH! HOW DO YOU DO IT, YOU MAKE IT ELEGANT AND BEAUTIFUL AND SO FUCKING HOT!
He'd never been so wet without bleeding before. Never felt such a mortifying slickness trickling down his thighs.
THAT. Dear lord, I just marvel at you. MARVEL. WHY YES, YES WE ARE KINK SOUL MATES. And the line before this, guh. I adore how, throughout the whole thing, the lust and the pleasure are always compared to something ghastly and gory and painful, such as the wire trap in his gut. It's such visceral imagery that has me flinching (I'm not big on gore) but it's all just a comparison for the lust and gah! YOU! I MARVEL!
Mmmmm and his groaning and moaning and wailing, and dear lord I have such a noisy!sex kink and you are just smashing it with Thor's hammer, GAH!
Empty, empty, his body screamed antonyms at him, oh yes, you're so empty. And wouldn't it be nice to be full...
That entire paragraph = Holy. Fuck.
Desperate Coward is the best kind of Coward, desperate for sex Coward is... THERE ARE NO WORDS FOR MY LOVE OF THIS PARAGRAPH IN DESCRIBING COWARD'S NEED FOR COCK!
And sweet jesus, having to pay the cab driver all... unnnnf, this comment is apparently going to be me making incoherent noises and flailing. A. Lot.
The carrot. I have completely lost my train of thought rereading that. Like, I know intellectually that it's funny, that I should be laughing, but my porn brain is like HOLY FUCK SO HOT. WHY IS THAT SO HOT, VICE? I DON'T UNDERSTAND. I blame your description of his tightness. *shivers*
OH! I WAS GOING TO QUOTE AT YOU, BUT GOT DISTRACTED!
To be fucked, to be taken, to have yourself stuffed full of cock – that's all that matters.
Yes Coward, that is what it's like to be an animal. And it is hot. Guh, just, guh, that bolded phrase especially. *keels over*
Henry teases him sometimes (teases while he's teasing) fingering him slowly, says that he's made to be fucked, that he's almost like a woman between his legs.
KINK BUDDIES! COWARD LIKE A WOMAN, GAAAAHH, COWARD MADE TO BE FUCKED, GAAAAAAAHHHHHH, YES YES YES YES YES! THAT. ALL OF THAT!
Then I'm just entirely incoherent for Coward, desperate and twitching on the floor in suspended orgasm... I can't even, like, just, dayum.