FFFFFFFFFFFFF LIKE ANYONE WOULD NOTICE SPELLING ERRORS WITH SUCH HOTNESS ON THEIR SCREEN!
God, this is just, holy bejesus, I can't even... it fries my brain. Like seriously, DESPERATELY NEEDING SEX COWARD, COULD YOU HAVE HIT A BIGGER KINK? I THINK NOT!
And the whole set up is brilliant, and Henry's tenderness is like the deceptive yielding of quicksand or tar. His love is as all consuming and so rarely without cruelty. That is a gorgeous bit of character there, because it so so true, and beautifully written. And I love that Coward knows this, he totally realizes it, but he loves his Henry anway. <3 <3
Henry smiled at him and then laughed at the presumption that he'd been the one doing the fucking. It could have been anyone at all, he'd pointed out, any number of people. Oh my goodnes, so ridiculously hot. I can't even... it's like... it's like having a scarf wrapped around your neck, and it's warm and lovely and then someone pulls it too tight and it's still delicious with that side of wrong. Errrr, if that makes sense...
And then oh my god, he's in public when it begins and I just lose all coherence from then on, just UNNNNFFF. Seriously, almost coming in his trousers? ANOTHER KINK YOU JUST SMASHED IN THE FACE. WITH A PENIS
The last paragraph and the last line.... THE LAST (but not really :D) PARAGRAPH AND THE LAST LINE OMG OMG OMG! JUST I CAN'T EVEN, I WOULD QUOTE THE WHOLE THING AT YOU, SO FREAKING HOT. WAIT WAIT Never felt such a mortifying slickness trickling down his thighs. THAT, JUST... THATx1000000
Pfff do you know how badly I want to see Coward just spread his legs and go to town right there in the cab? Like seriously, seriously, abuse yourself Coward. DO IT.
I hope you know I will be waiting desperately for part 2. As desperately as Coward wants cock in this fic
Henry smiled at him and then laughed at the presumption that he'd been the one doing the fucking. It could have been anyone at all, he'd pointed out, any number of people.
Oh DAMN, I had no idea I had an implied unconscious gang-bang kink!
Seriously though, this is amazing - what torture! What is poor Coward going to do?
Apprently I need Megan someone to hold my hand and guide me through my f-list to get around reading awesome stuf, so thanks to Megan for that.
AND YOU! YOU! *flails, points and gestures wildly at fic*
Henry's tenderness is like the deceptive yielding of quicksand or tar. His love is as all consuming and so rarely without cruelty. I just needed to quote this as well. becasue- well, it's absoluetly fucking gorgeous.
I love teh fact that you hold on to this suspence, the edginess, throughout the whole fic; the torturing of Nicholas dosn't get booring and doesnt seem to go on for too long.
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Date: 2010-12-20 01:24 am (UTC)God, this is just, holy bejesus, I can't even... it fries my brain. Like seriously, DESPERATELY NEEDING SEX COWARD, COULD YOU HAVE HIT A BIGGER KINK? I THINK NOT!
And the whole set up is brilliant, and Henry's tenderness is like the deceptive yielding of quicksand or tar. His love is as all consuming and so rarely without cruelty. That is a gorgeous bit of character there, because it so so true, and beautifully written. And I love that Coward knows this, he totally realizes it, but he loves his Henry anway. <3 <3
Henry smiled at him and then laughed at the presumption that he'd been the one doing the fucking. It could have been anyone at all, he'd pointed out, any number of people. Oh my goodnes, so ridiculously hot. I can't even... it's like... it's like having a scarf wrapped around your neck, and it's warm and lovely and then someone pulls it too tight and it's still delicious with that side of wrong. Errrr, if that makes sense...
And then oh my god, he's in public when it begins and I just lose all coherence from then on, just UNNNNFFF. Seriously, almost coming in his trousers? ANOTHER KINK YOU JUST SMASHED IN THE FACE.
WITH A PENISThe last paragraph and the last line.... THE LAST (but not really :D) PARAGRAPH AND THE LAST LINE OMG OMG OMG! JUST I CAN'T EVEN, I WOULD QUOTE THE WHOLE THING AT YOU, SO FREAKING HOT. WAIT WAIT Never felt such a mortifying slickness trickling down his thighs. THAT, JUST... THATx1000000
Pfff do you know how badly I want to see Coward just spread his legs and go to town right there in the cab? Like seriously, seriously, abuse yourself Coward. DO IT.
I hope you know I will be waiting desperately for part 2.
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Date: 2010-12-21 12:58 am (UTC)*shoots porn with a sawn off shotgun*
It refuses to die!
Oh man, your comments though, they do so buoy me up in the midst of battling the zombie porn. (No seriously, thank you so much *hugs*)
We are like kinkmates sometimes you know? *brofist* I FEEL YOUR ENTHUSIASM AND MATCH IT, YEA VERILY. :D
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Date: 2010-12-20 08:42 pm (UTC)Oh DAMN, I had no idea I had an implied unconscious gang-bang kink!
Seriously though, this is amazing - what torture! What is poor Coward going to do?
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Date: 2010-12-21 12:53 am (UTC)Ha! Okay, so that made me burst out laughing. Mmm, you're a connoisseur of fine kink! Thank you kindly, *bows* ah yes, what will Coward do. >:D
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Date: 2010-12-21 06:31 pm (UTC)PFFFT. Oh, Blackwood. Sneaky sneaky.
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Date: 2010-12-26 10:52 am (UTC)AND YOU! YOU! *flails, points and gestures wildly at fic*
Henry's tenderness is like the deceptive yielding of quicksand or tar. His love is as all consuming and so rarely without cruelty. I just needed to quote this as well. becasue- well, it's absoluetly fucking gorgeous.
I love teh fact that you hold on to this suspence, the edginess, throughout the whole fic; the torturing of Nicholas dosn't get booring and doesnt seem to go on for too long.
<3